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[ masked face ]

masked face
under a streetlight
urban raccoon

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    April 19, 2008

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    The question I have is what kind of music does he listen to. I like this short and sweet. Thank you for entering


  • micol
    April 18, 2008

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    "Masked face" is nicely ambiguous in the context, slightly threatening and at the same time (as the image suggests) slightly comical. Well worded.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 16, 2008

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    Awwww ... unusual but so lovely at the same time
    I find myself thinking of different images of urban racoons ...
    Great write

    Best of luck in the contest
    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • passionate-poet
    April 14, 2008
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    lol cute poem


  • sheltered
    April 12, 2008

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    an urban raccon bandit
    premeditated, planned it

    wabid wabbits
    spilling blood
    of Elmer Fudd


  • marlene47 silver member
    April 7, 2008
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    The little rascals! Nice little surprise.
    Marlene

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