The feathers’ brush
across my cheek
provokes sensations…
But I grow cold.
I’ve known the
Arrogance
of Perfection's love,
but his Grace too:
more than
the taint of
promised Forever.
Author notes
'Other men said they have seen angels,
But I have seen thee
And thou art enough.'
~ by G. Moore ~
I love my title.
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
600 points, ended April 7, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww wow!
this is very powerful and beautifull written
well done and good luck
take care
stephanie
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This reveals a slight bitterness to me. Possible falsified testaments tend to put a lot of us on guard though. Once trust can be gained, then possibly we will be able to let ourself go.
eg ~ Steve
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Nice turn of the prompt.
I enjoyed reading this.
Best of luck in the contest.
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wow this was so much better than mine...well done..
Thanks for the share
Simon
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Excellent
Wonderful expression for the prompt. So very well done. best of luck in the contest.
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This is a great write all
the way through! Beautiful
words you have penned here
for this prompt. Well done
and good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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