Confusion
A tornado constantly surrounding me
Grasping me
Trying to choke me
Words swirl in my mind
In and out as they please
Though generally not at the right time.
Why?
It confuses people around me
why I'm confused all the time
about one little thing I
could change,
if I wanted to,
if I do.
Maybe I do.
Oh confusion.
Author notes
This doesn't really have to do with anything specific, in case some people are wondering.
I don't like confusion...
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
I like how you kept it vague, so that it could have multiple interpretations. well done.
-
Interesting...um...I can't think of anything to say becuase I am suddenly brain dead (and leg dead ) Cool metaphors...great job!
-
-
lol
but thanks for the comment 
-
-
Hey...This sounds strangely like me
How odd.
Nice write though
-
ELElent I love
-
good poem!!!!!!!!!! I realyl likt this good job
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
