How could Heaven
be more real
than when the halo
within your heart
wraps me in God's love?
Stroll paradise
my soul redeemed
by the wings
of my divine dove.
Author notes
'Other men said they have seen angels,
But I have seen thee
And thou art enough.'
~ by G. Moore ~
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
600 points, ended April 7, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh... tears are in my eyes... to be loved and looked at as if i were an angel, touching someone's life with my love... just beautiful, but makes my heart ache at the same time.
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wwww this is so lovely
nice write, and great take on the pormpt
take care
stephanie
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Very beautiful, best of luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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Beautiful!!
Oooooooooooooooooooh Love this one~
Beauty of a verse and Wonderful take on the prompt
The last stanza just grabs
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
Best wishes too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Oh my gosh ... the last stanza is just so beautiful ...
Divinity at it's best, yes. 
eg ~ Steve
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Its true to its own title, my friend.
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Absolutely fabulous. Wow. The wrapping halo is my favorite part. Good luck in the contest.
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This is awesome!
Such beauty and heart in this write.
Wonderful work as always my friend
and good luck to you here!
Jeremy0826
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