Never known
such a feeling as to be
loved by thee.
Passion thou display
is beyond imagination.
Never believed
in the so-called angel.
Never thought it
could be real.
Until...thee.
Author notes
'Other men said they have seen angels,
But I have seen thee
And thou art enough.'
~ by G. Moore ~
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
600 points, ended April 7, 2008, 5 entries
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please read all rules again in contest if you choose you can re enter..thank you
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aww this is sooooo lovely
and a beautiful language. lol
good luck
take care
stephanie
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plop. yep. At least I hope so! Different direction ... I like.
... Passion thou display is beyond imagination ... very nice.
eg ~ Steve
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awwwwww
I liked this very much.
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Angelic
A nicely penned, whimsical piece... Good luck in the contest... -
I like how you imitated the language of the quote. I feel the ellipsis in the last line doesn't quite fit, but to each their own. Beautiful write and good luck in the contest.
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Excellent work here!
All the best to you in this
contest and keep up the wonderful
work here!
Jeremy0826 -
Excellent
Wonderful take on the prompt. Such a great flow of thought. best of luck in the contest.
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