Avarice Apples

Petty revenge on
too Pretty girls.

Take some
Forbidden fruit...
Indulge-
you can

Bite Me.

A contest entry

PIF Semi quickie 10/15 by Valley Girl. 300 points, ended April 7, 2008, 7 entries
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Manda Kathryn
April 6, 2008

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Fabulous write
Just curious ... is the 'too' meant to mean 'two' as in 2 girl or as in they are 'too' pretty?

Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
- Medea
  April 7, 2008
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  It is meant to be "too". Who is the fairest of them all? The girls that are too pretty for their own good. Make sense?
- - Manda Kathryn
    April 7, 2008
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    Yes
Valley Girl
April 6, 2008
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Great take on the prompt, I like how you have capitalized the "P" to make it stand out better. Best of luck in the contest, and thank you for entering.
- Medea
  April 6, 2008
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  Thanks, but I've changed it a little bit since you've read it. I just couldn't settle.
- - Valley Girl
    April 6, 2008
    
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    I do like the flow of this one much better, thank you for the update.