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Where Juan?(Triolet)

Where oh where is my son Juan
I thought he boarded the plane with me
Just looked around and he is gone
Where oh where is my son Juan
Not in aisle, seat or the john
In cockpit with pilot could he be
Where oh where is my son Juan
Thought he boarded the plane with me

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  • Cat10
    May 19, 2008

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    thank you for entering! very interesting poem! it reminded me of this movie I saw lol, its a great write and good luck in the contest!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    LOL Well, umm he kinda did!! Great take on the prompt! Thanks for entering and good luck!