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Poisoned Mind

Missing image

Greed echoed fate
from maniacal grins
considering everything
won by sin
tricking innocence

once again.

             

              




 

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pic credit: unknwon

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    April 6, 2008

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    Greaat take on the prompt, I really like the imagery that you have used for this write, you really have created a scene. Best of luck in the contest, and thank you for entering.