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Apple Pick

PICKED up an apple
and started sucking it.
Direct from the tree
tasted ,SO  fresh

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PIF Semi quickie 10/15

A contest entry

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    April 6, 2008

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    Interesting take on the prompt. You have added some good imagery. Best of luck in the contest, and thank you for entering.