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W.M.D.

What is out there?
Up in the sky?
Tv news show a warning!
BOOM!! What was that?!
BOOM, BOOM!! Houses gone!

What the hell is going on!?
Again and again, they fall and
fall. Looking like red balloons
flying in the sky.
BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! I'm left
alone, all walls blown down.
Dirt and debris on my face.


Hello?

Hello?

Where did the red balloons go?

Alone.

Author notes

I don't know where this came from...Kind of based off Nena's 99 Red Balloons.

AP sister? - leslielovesthomas

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  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    May 5, 2008

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    reminds me a lot of a child. And BOOM by system of a down.

    i love the last lines. sums it up well.


  • Folklor
    April 21, 2008

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    welcome leslielovesthomas to my family. I thought your poem was very unique and had a heartfelt message. I cant wait to get to know you


  • myriad-dark
    April 16, 2008

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    very thought provoking

    I liked this... I know the song in question & this is like a very dark satire & apocalyptic scenario of doomsday... well done & good luck in the contest...


  • Midgetbridgey
    April 16, 2008
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    i like it goodluck


  • penman gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    Interesting

    A very unique creation for the prompt. Takes balloons in a lot different direction. Best of luck in the contest.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 15, 2008
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    LOL...this is very original...nicely creative and interesting...thank you for entering!

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