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Bad Bad

Shame, shame, Miss Kitty Kat.
You went and scraped up the mat.
You peed in the hall
You scratched on the wall.
Now what do you have to say to that?!

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Dumb...I know...

A contest entry

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  • peridotPixi
    April 7, 2008

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    if you think your poem is dumb, you should look at mine, i think yours is cute, i like the end "what do you have to say to that"? that is cute, good luck in the contest, keep writing, -Amy


  • daviscth
    April 7, 2008

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    LOL. I enjoyed reading your take on the adorable picture. I could just see the poor kitty being scolded. Good Luck.


  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    Good one

    your poems it impress me. this one is a really beautiful written I love the let last stanza most especially. Nothing to change. I look forward to your nex


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    Sowwyyyyyy. . . Awww poor thing! This is cute. Thanks for entering and good luck!