I'm sorry

"Go ahead-come on" ...Bring down this rain

I've already endured another storm today

And No matter how hard this may be

there's absolutely nothing that I dare to say.

Where shall I find another love like yours?

when heaven has now locked its gates

I closed these eyes as you walked away

leaving my heart in such desperate straits.

~PLEASE STOP, don't just leave like this

for that's not how it was supposed to be

turn around-come back, I love you so

'oh darling Angel can you feel this plea?

A contest entry

Piccy-inspired by amaranthine lover. 400 points, ended April 23, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

1 - 5 of 5

By me, right now

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Polaja
April 25, 2008

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Hood-Winked!
This is a wonderful take on the entry - sad and beautifully crafted congratulations on the honourable mention - it was certainly well deserved with this wonderful piece

Keep writing

Polly
mindpoet
April 25, 2008
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Wonderfully piquant piece. Good luck in the contest!
SilverInk
April 24, 2008
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hoodwinked!
aw this is so sweet, good write
amaranthine lover
April 23, 2008
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This is soft and a lovely take of the picture prompt.
Ir.muse
April 6, 2008

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hello dear uncle,

I'm sure this will turn out to be a beautiful poem.
Wish you luck in the contest.

Shahrzad