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Forever We See Discipline of the Soul

If I had just let you know,
We'd be side by side throwing pillows
                              having fun.

Instead:

Braids have been untied,
Smiles have been broken repeatedly,
Little white lies have been told.

Dreams bleeding though the cracks,
Our love was the
              Game of Easy come and Easy go.
                         
To see you now cuts me like a knife

Every night the glow of the moon shines on me
                    reminding me somehow of the inside pain of you.
                   
Thorns thrown prevented healing
              Is this my lesson of failure?
                                Have my rose colored glasses fallen off?

          Miles apart desperation locks all doors.
      Searching for answers only the past can solve.
             
Realizing what you have doesn't fit with me.
Turn around now, don't look back, don't say goodbye.
I have already forgiven you my past lover of yesterday.

Author notes

options 1: combined two titles together

option 2: 1.Broken 2.Dreams 3.Thorn 4.Glow of the Moon
7.Side by side 8.Is this my lesson 9.If I had just let you know 10.Glasses 11.Braids have been untied 12.Inside
13.Little white Lie 14.Rose 15.Night
16.Game of Easy come and Easy go
17.To see you cuts me like a knife
18.Pillow 20.What you have doesn't fit 22.Some how
23.Miles apart 24.Bleeding 25.Every

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  • broken bloody angel
    April 9, 2008
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    beautiful and emotional! I LOVE IT!

    -Bella


  • Nikki Rowles
    April 7, 2008
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    Thank you I really didn't want to have to DQ this fabulous poem

  • Nikki Rowles
    April 7, 2008
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    Good...but

    Ok this is a good write...I didn't think that anyone would do more than one of the options in the same poem...very talented mind...but I must point out that you didn't place your AP name in A.N....please do so...I don't not wish to have to DQ such a great write

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