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Self-portrait to a Lover




it’s you
            [i see]
on curved surface smile...

more than
-line- and (shape):
you hold
            my hue
in your eye.



A contest entry

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  • Unsigned gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    Well once again this really is a wonderful style....well done poet...really enjoyed it...

    Simon

  • Entwining Beauty
    April 6, 2008

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    this is just divine such a beautiful poem good luck in the contest


  • Twisted Fairy gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    Eloquent and simple. Great prose. Good luck in the contest!