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The dos and don'ts, exept the don'ts

So not,
jump!
Where are we,
and Am I there?
Dare!

Be you and do it,
live and breathe.
Life!

A contest entry

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  • Unsigned gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    Was this a message for me? If so thank you...

    Nice write...can't work it into the prompt though

    simon


  • Twisted Fairy
    April 6, 2008

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    Always good to have that inspiration. Good luck in the contest.


  • Entwining Beauty
    April 6, 2008

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    I like where you went with the image given, I see why you wrote the poem you did, I loved the view I got as i read your poem was very well written with an amzaing meaning to it good luck in the contest