Translucent vision of clarity,
Bathed within essence,
Palette of sensual colours,
Stroke the artist brush,
The subject,
His lover.
In a list
A contest entry
- Pic inspired Quickie - Clarity of Vision by Unsigned.
450 points, ended April 6, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful!
Imagery, imagery, IMAGERY! This was so clever and creative! I really enjoyed reading this piece! Wow! This literally blew my mind because I'm absolutely speechless!
Translucent vision of clarity,
Bathed within essence,
So compelling and powerful! Congrats on the gold, because you deserved it!!!
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This is such a great piece, so beautifully constructed with the perfect unseen ending. This very much deserved the status it has reached in gold and home page glory. Well done
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You say so much with few words. I enjoyed the ending very much. Every day with my Luis we create a new masterpiece. Lovely write and well deserving of the gold trophy
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This is brillent worthy of your gold reward. I have always enjoyed short writes not realizing they how much emotion that could be in such a short write
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Thank you so much for your comment x
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packed full of emotion
in such a short piece, you have captured alot
well deserved of the gold
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Many thanks for your comment on my little write x
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wow so much emotional charge in so few lines! well worth the gold!
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OH WOW.. that was so gorgeous hun! Congrats on the gold.. I can see why this piece of beautifully descriptive and sensual piece won!
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This was well worthy of the golden cup sister. Your imagery is awesome. I love your short pieces. Just awesome.
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That was brilliant. Such a short piece but I can see why this won gold. Very very creative indeed. Your writing is getting stronger Julie.
Love
Wayne Leon
x
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Congrats on the gold!!
A divine write, I love it! Read so smoothly, a very creative take on the picture. Fabulous wording to create the images portrayed. Simply gorgeous. Congrats on the well earned gold, keep penning!
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A clearer view of the world through one's own impression. Sometimes perspective is really all that matters I much like the ending too as it captures the "essence", shall I say, of any artist's subject. Nicely done, Sis, congratz on the shiny gold!
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Congrats on your gold, it was well deserved as your write is just amazing. Very nice indeed.
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Beautiful! Well worded and goes GREAT with that picture!
Congrats on the Gold!!!!
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Nice craft. I liked the calmness I felt in reading this. Good luck in the contest!
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Beautiful...truly wonderful
Thank you for this...
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Thank you
for my little nugget of gold and for hosting this contest
Julie x
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Great write and right on the prompt
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oh my this is very beautiful and creative good luck in the contest
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Concise and powerful. You grasp the imagery perfectly, and do have quite an punch in your last line. I loved this! Your work here was excellent as always
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