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Unspoiled

who would've thought
that this person
would become Pakistan's greatest hero

she died for her cause
her cause lived her

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Benazir Bhutto. One of my heros.

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  • a good piece of poetry, it is sad time that we live in, i remeember the day she died for the sake of freedom.

  • Lalulis
    May 17
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    did I enjoy this?.......uh yah!!

    you always manage to say so much , in just a few carefully chosen words....brilliance I think!!...
  • A thoughtful dedication to a hero of our times
    Great write!


  • blutig
    April 6

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    I'm just wondering....

    "her cause lived her" -> shouldn't that be "her cause loved her"?

    Just a thought. I really liked this--it's memorialistic



    --Aden

  • Great ending, awesome poem over all.

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