He looked with the magnifying glass
and sat pondering the moment
when he would select his lover
as advertised earlier.
A contest entry
- Pic inspired Quickie - Clarity of Vision by Unsigned.
450 points, ended April 6, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very interesting...
I like it alot.. very short.. but good!
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This was sort of creepy for me...like a stalker or something. Well conceived, and the title gives that extra touch of 'bug under glass' that gave me the hair raising on the back of my neck. That's damn good writing right there! WAM
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this one was a little "quirky"...but once again a great write
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i like poems that say a lot in a little. this is deifnately one of them. great job.
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Hmmm...kind of quirky. The ending is quite interesting. Lovely write.
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wow, this is great
haa very unique and lovely to read
ake care
sood luck
stephanie
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Thank you, Stephanie.
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Wonderful write...the more I do this short form stuff the more I like it...
Fantastic
Simon -
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
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Good take.
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wow amazing, Fantastic take on the picture given good luck in the contest
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