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Stolen Colors

Missing image

Black and white prisons
barred unique
trialed with errors
I couldn't see.

Delicate views

grasped eyes

where lifes' hues,

           remained.

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  • Twisted Fairy
    April 6, 2008

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    Excellent. I love how you related this to the sublime. Good luck in the contest.


  • Unsigned gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    great write Poet..I loved getting lost in this vision..

    Simon