So, here am I
Filling lines with boredom
But when I try and write
A plain empty feeling
Surrounding
A beautiful write?
What's that supposed to be?
As stated in the flash remembrance
Of metrics, rhymes and tones
Beyond that my ship goes
Stalking the depths of horrid dreams and beauty
Signatures of remarkable scars
And the rusty words
Appearing here and there
Out of boredom
Author notes
My username goes here? Kyo-N, I suppose.
And the word... [Gentlewinds] That was it?
A contest entry
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Comments
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Loved the message in this. Very personal and I enoyed it. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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Nice poem. It's very well thought-out and it's written very well. I like the style.
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MAXBOY
OK!!!! How big of a grant did you get to find the cure for writers block? Well, you did it. Thank You
MAXBOY
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i like how you worded this... and talked about not having anything to really write, yet you have written quite well on that topic.
succinct and simply stated.. i like that.
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Only1love4ever-Reply
Please return to the contest overview and read.
You forgot a couple of things in the author notes.
This is fun. I like how you describe boredom and how you have nothing to write of, but yet you are writing.
It is clear and precise. Wonderfully written.
Thank you for your entry.
It is much appreciated.
God Bless.
Have a great day!
~only1love4ever -
If your ultimate goal was to achieve a remarkable piece of poetry, I think you have attained it. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
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