I want you I want you
now that you are gone
i wanna be in your arm
again to feel what love is
like the solitary reaper in a far far-farm
to enjoy the beautiful beautiful-bliss
I want you I want you
now that you are by-gone
I wanna tell you how I enjoyed being as us
more than the solitude that you left me with
While I enjoyed all your fuss and cuss
Getting back now sounds like a myth
I want you I want you
now that you are long gone
I wish you'd miss me
lesser than how much I miss you
For I could show my teeth in glee
That I love you more even after things blew
I want you I want you
Oh oh yeah! I’m now back with you-my loo
Was is funny?
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yes, it has an underlying humour touch
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sorry but rules are rules and so i have to DQ...sorry
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"i wanna be in your arm"
arm should be arms... unless this person only has one arm.
I'm not sure what to say. I don't really like to read and comment poetry. However, like the repetition of the first lines of the stanzas. I understand that you're mourning the loss of someone and then in the end you get them back. Keep it up, poetry takes practice. -
aww..I know the feeling...that was a very good write
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hmmm..
this was a cutesy write and all but i know it exceeds 20words so please edit, i do not want to DQ anyone..
thanks for entering, very much.
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are you there??
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