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the language of touch

 

 

 

al fine

 

 

I

time is a skin, the poet says, leaves
of an old-old journey



II

finger the letters of my name

before my skin becomes a bell-tower
that tells the hours, each wrinkle
the many peals of decay,

dull of heart
with dust on the tongue



III

lay words like “us” in my mouth

before I acquire the vocabulary
of old age, and time forgets
its shoes in mirrors,

and pillows grow quiet



IV

sleep in me, awake in me

the glow of abandon,
undeniable as purple flowers
among grass



V

say:

the love that rings, deeper
than yesterdays,

lives naked in this house

 

 

 

~ x ~

 

 

 

 

 

a wish, literally spoken

 

 

to awake with fingers at the tips
of words, full sentences
rubbed against the skin
of your name –

daily,
inside sound,

trembling in articulations
of bodily language

 

 

 

 ~ x ~

 

 

 

 

 

beyond ink

 

 

I shout
from paper roofs
what my hands think I am –

but your hands read my strophes, find more
than ink

 

 

 

~ x ~

 

 

 

 

© Nicolette

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Yvette Champ gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Nicolette...

    The language of touch...is your natural language...your fine fingertips must have the most minute sensitive tongues akin to stamen...this trophy poetry is seamless...timeless...yet is streamlined and belongs to eternity...I don't simply read I revel within each elevated part of the cosmos that you share an affinity with..." time is a skin" ..." finger the letters of my name" ..." lay words like "us" in my mouth" ..." sleep in me awake in me" ..." a wish literally spoken" ..." beyond ink"...
    indeed no amount of my meandering or word mumbling could suffice for what I wish I could convey...I adore your graceful majesty...You add Love and Light...always...always there is a complete yet an ethereal feel within your language of touch...


    • Nicolette gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      Yvette

      i know i have said this so often, but even your comments are pure poetry. you do carry the beautiful inside you... thank you so very much. you are a wonderful woman, human being and poet through and through

  • karen denizen
    November 19, 2008
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    lovely


  • Eddie Ecstasy
    November 19, 2008
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    I don't even know what to say, really. But 'thanks' may do it. That was awesome!


  • MysticalRayne
    November 19, 2008
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    I love the structure of this piece and your flow is flawless - a pleasure *rose


  • Melba Solis-Z
    November 18, 2008
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    I enjoyed reading this... thank you


  • sailor ptolema
    November 18, 2008
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    so gorgeous.


  • Jaden silver member
    November 18, 2008
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    Very nice Nicolette . . .


  • WretchedLove
    November 18, 2008

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    I like this a lot, but I'm not sure I understand it. Could you take the time to explain it to me, please? It would be greatly appreciated...


  • Mad Moon silver member
    November 18, 2008

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    Speechless.
    Breathless.
    Wrapped in your words; completely.

  • nsmurty
    November 18, 2008

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    A great amalgam of word pictures.
    'your hands read my strophes, find more than ink"
    is just superb

  • grm
    November 18, 2008

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    hey! i remember these!


    the incredible, edible, touch. lol


    • Nicolette gold member
      November 18, 2008
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      trust you to think of something "edible", lol


      thanks, liefie


  • Death of the Author
    November 18, 2008
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    The II-V parts are my favourite. All amazing though


  • Cat gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    -


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    No comment could do this justice. Absolutely stunning!!

  • dx d by me
    August 29, 2008
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    I have not read this one before and I did not know how poor I was until now. This day has become beautiful. Geo

  • wendymolly
    June 29, 2008

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    reminds me of an old "Wings" song, band on the run".
    Don't know exactly the reason, other than... the three approach in telling always the same story. genius.
    ~brian.


  • JohnnyD gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Lovely-
    And sublime-
    Indeed as our dreams-
    Hopes, lusts, desires-
    Tattoo our hearts –
    And skin-
    Each with their-
    Unique qualities-
    We become as books-
    Of large print-
    To be read by all-
    From near-
    Or far-
    And so it is-
    As it should be-
    We-
    For all to see-
    And understand-




    JD


  • Beating gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    wow! This piece is just beautiful! It almost felt like a play of words, that came out truly poetic. You spoke of so much truth, and I love the way you build up the entire piece. Loved it!

  • dx d by me
    May 14, 2008

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    This collection is one to mull over, to consider, and let it play its music. There is such a variety of notes to hear. And these comments are far short of how this makes me feel. I adore it when poetry has a physiological effect. Thank you! Geo


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Breathless...
    Like the dying whispers of falling leaves. You always leave me at the end of your writes, a gypsy at the end of a journey, wanting more steps to be taken. I have missed your words, buried in your passions. Nice to revisit an old friend, and her heartbeats in ink.

    Blessed be,
    Billie Jean


  • Swan song gold member
    May 10, 2008
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    This was truly awesome! Another deep breath of air
    to submerge myself in.

  • 'finger the letters of my name'
    There really is so much here which makes me feel response, I simply can't make at present. I pluck this line out purely because it resonates with me in connection with the 'mid-conversation' between Liza and I about 'words meaning and Arabic'. Briefly it was/is to do with each letter having its own meaning and definite place in words which name and carry the very meaning of their 'object' far more precisely than in English.

    Here I read it as a chaptering out of the witnessing of 'your name' in the moments. I see far more here and I love the way it all strikes so personally and yet remains universal, as I see it.

    'Love living naked in your house', yes please, even when I'm apparently on my own, in fact especially then!

    Wonderful!
    Time for this one to 'draw its curtains'.

    Sol


  • Emerald13
    May 7, 2008

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    as i told Liza ... i am telling you both, I AM NOT SURPRISED ... congratulations ! lovely poetry as always ... warm, universal with wonderful metaphors and emotional ties ... lovely stuff ... i am thrilled to be in such company in this contest (ok ok so thats where the surprise came in lol ) >>> Gina


    • Nicolette gold member
      May 7, 2008
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      I can only echo your words back to you, Gina.... thank you so much. LOLOL, actually the surprise is mine!


  • ArtFullyMe gold member
    May 7, 2008
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    I expected it to be you..

    this is beautiful..

  • tara wilson gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    congratulations Nic - this collection of poems, again, is beautiful & I am happy you placed silver with these...they will hopefully all be published in your next book..


    • Nicolette gold member
      May 7, 2008
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      Thank you... . Jaaa, let's hope there is a 2nd book...


  • Leslie gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    this is really good, I have always felt a fascination with separating lines that touch me deeply and elaborate them in strophes, so you my friend have become my hero, its just that this syllable in this piece touches the heart of those who love amazing.

    Leslie


  • Mr Vertigo
    May 3, 2008

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    I like hits, it reminds me of someone else I know. You would be flattered believe me. You write very sensually, I wish there was someplace else I could read your work besides here, although I do enjoy catching op on your things when I do check in.

    One can say, if you don’t mind me saying so… You can tell a lot about how a person makes love by the way they express themselves. We tend to naturally express ourselves sensually, whether it be through words or music or paints and our sensualities take on a more infinite form.

    Therefore a kiss can last forever.

    This is probably why we fall in love with certain peoples work that we can bask in the warmth of their and our - dreams and fantasies. Despite the fact that they may be only words, there are intimacies beyond the human touch, wherefore it is more like staring into someones eyes – forever.

    Soft and beautiful as always.

    c

    • Nicolette gold member
      May 3, 2008
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      What a beautiful comment, my friend. Yes, i read somewhere that all light within us is sensual... and we can choose how to express it. I like the more softer, intimate light... I hope you are well - great to see you again


  • Dienush
    May 3, 2008

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    Wow - "the language ofg skin" is so warm and vivid... I have seen many poets try a similar style, but, unlike them, you truly have it in you. This is so soft... I just really love it and I'm not sure what more could be added


    • Nicolette gold member
      May 3, 2008
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      ... thank you, Diana - you've said enough to make me smile...


  • klassy lassy
    April 29, 2008

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    "before I acquire the vocabulary
    of old age, and time forgets
    its shoes in mirrors,

    Nicci, this is mistful poem. Such mirrors and barefooted imagery...


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    April 28, 2008

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    Beautiful pen, smiles
    I adore these...Your words just dance along and offer so much light and love....smiles
    Such a nice place to visit..
    Many blessings
    ~A~


  • Cannonsfire
    April 26, 2008

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    Just wondering if I can live in your skin for a day Just to breathe what you breathe in this world. Love, C


    • Nicolette gold member
      April 26, 2008
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      The feel the same about you, Cheryl!! Thank you beautiful one


  • Sonja
    April 26, 2008

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    I am back to read it again...
    ~Sonja~


  • Balldinger silver member
    April 23, 2008

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    more skin...

    woah! line 'em up and print 'em all! in view of the surface area, i found myself gliding into regions sifted and gracefully carried. your words are like observing a feather floating on a gentle breeze - good for the soul and tingly to the skin... ~ EZB


  • ferg silver member
    April 20, 2008

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    Delicate and deep

    I loved the soft and delicate allure of your carefully chosen words, especially "A Wish Literally Spoken", this has the fragrant scent of true love. Your metaphors are deep, creative and thought provoking. These kind of reads leave me staring at my computer screen entranced, as the words unfold as a movie in my mind. This is amazing work.

    Henri


    • Nicolette gold member
      April 20, 2008
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      I like the "wish poem" myself too, Henri . Thank you for a lovely comment


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    Your words are light and sweet, like coconut cream pie, yummy What a brilliant heart's labor dear Nicolette, and best of luck in the contest.


    Love and peace always,
    mj.

  • tara wilson gold member
    April 16, 2008
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    I see you have completed your collection of poems for this now,...these are so beautiful, Nic..they should ALL be published I love the title & this collection of poetry so much..

    *applauds again*..lol


  • HeLovesMeNot
    April 16, 2008

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    It's beautiful......but everyone's said that already. Always a great read coming from you. Loved It!!!

  • Sonja
    April 14, 2008
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    Perfect!

    I am used to call this kind of poetry - miniature - but each one is speaking itself the same beauty of love and skin and touches, and... poetry.
    ~Sonja~


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    Nothing else to say, everyone already said it all.
    Truly beautiful. Your words are a gift, my dear poet.
    Write on ~~~ & on ~~~ & on ~~~.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • myrataal silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    As always ...

    wondrous work from the pen of a true poet.



  • Namita
    April 13, 2008
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    yaay!!! love the new titles...

    hope you're fine...


    • Nicolette gold member
      April 13, 2008
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      thank you, namita ... yes, i'm fine...just been so busy lately, lol!!


  • AngelSeeker silver member
    April 13, 2008

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    Now that I've read your submissions I'm thinking I should pull my humble attempts; until I have something worthy of being pressed next to your luxuriant lexis. The problem is I could never weave words as magically as you do. When you write you transform language into passion. Beautiful.


  • NoIQ gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    Well DAMN! Try as I might, I can't read my favorite subject of sex into this work! There's that damn line "and pillows grow quiet." What's with that Nicolette. You KNOW I've come to expect noisy pillow poems.

    Good God! This almost could be, might be, arrrgh, about LOVE?!! What's with that? I don't care that it is supremely well written, or that it employs all your marvelous talent with imagery, phraseology, and thought on the passage of life. Love? Since when do you care about love?????! No no no. Sex.

    Wait, WAIT! I see there IS hope. Hmmmm. I DO approve of "sleep in me, awake in me", but what's this notion of "abandon" in the next sentence.

    However, you do redeem yourself Monte-style with the final line "lives naked in this house" ...

    OK -- you get a free pass for writing a love poem, because you at least admitted you spend your time naked in your house. Not as good as sex, but admittedly not bad. I approve of 24/7 naked, so I will applaud

    Supurb poem for Zayra's contest Nicolette. Wonderful tone and wonderful progression.

    • Nicolette gold member
      April 13, 2008

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      Lolol Monta - I'm glad i didn't disappoint you too much . I've added two little ones to the entry too which might be more pleasing to you. Thanks - your comments are always a treat.

      • NoIQ gold member
        April 14, 2008
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        Yes, so I see now. I applaud again -- for as you know, I delight in cinquains too, and that third piece is a supurb one. Hell, I would applaud just for the use of "strophes."

        Your command of short forms is particularly breathtaking, Nicolette. I love writing them myself, so I know how incredibly difficult they really are to draft. I think some people feel they are easy because of the paucity of words and just tend to rip them out. However, anyone who has ever tried to write them with the care you do knows that the paucity of words presents particular challenges to convey the emotional impact we seek in poetry. As your two new entries reflect, you always succeed at that very difficult task.

  • Suzanne Dia
    April 10, 2008

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    This is so beautiful, Nicci. How do you write so softly? Touches me to the core every time.





  • K-Dense
    April 9, 2008

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    the love that rings, deeper
    than yesterdays,

    lives naked in this house

    -Gorgeous stanza.

    -Curtis Meyer


  • And Hyetal
    April 9, 2008

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    beautiful.



    I love how this was broken up into 5 parts. This warmed my heart to read.

    simply wonderful.

    ~Cassie


  • Mari Goes gold member
    April 9, 2008
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    This is so you... so wonderful


  • le soir
    April 8, 2008

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    just came back to read this again


  • inder silver member
    April 8, 2008

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    delightful

    each one of them a string across the same guitar yet a unique note. A distinguished flavour that satiates the senses and leaves the soul wanting more.
    Amazing writes Nic! Each one a delight that sways the heart 'al fine'


  • Elora Danon gold member
    April 7, 2008

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    You've given me a life line to hold until my one and only returns. My pillow has been much too quiet.

    Thank you for this.

    e~


  • leander Moderators member
    April 7, 2008

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    What beauty you have captured in your words, and still you manage to write more originality with your new gems.

    If you ask me publication? Then I'd say 'Definately more than once' my friend.


  • IronIcecream
    April 7, 2008
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    finger said
    in the letters of a name
    soaked to the skin
    is time

  • Namita
    April 7, 2008

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    I hope my poem too is selected for publication. This one, for sure, will be chosen. I long to be lost in a page, rich with your immeasurable talent.


    Now.

    You are the luckiest woman on earth, and Guy is the luckiest man. You don't speak English, nor do you speak Afrikaans. You speak love, m'friend. The rich language of love. Reading your poetry is like listening to Yanni. Thanks for writing music to our ears. Your words are the keys of a piano. Guy likes playing them; and he plays very well too. Love the use of italics here- gives me a lovely feel of "legato". I must say, even though you both are such amazing piano players, you sing the songs of love better. And for that, I don't think you need those "piano"s. Just sing... "a cappella"... a cappella...


    • Nicolette gold member
      April 7, 2008
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      I love your comment, Namita ...and the way you saw the music in this one. Guy is actually a great guitar player (and i try to play piano) . Thank you, dear one... a capella!!

      • Namita
        April 7, 2008
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        Do you know that Winston learnt to play the flute once? Like, he isn't really good at that anyway. Oh well. You get it, dontcha?

  • tara wilson gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    so beautiful, Nic


  • arafura gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    Wonderful! Another gem from your gifted pen. Good luck in the contest!


  • Heart Sutra
    April 6, 2008
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  • Randomly Beautiful
    April 6, 2008

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    There is not a single piece that you have written that I would not give a million applause to if I could. This would get ten million. I love the whole piece, especially the last line.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    Superb

    Oh, how wonderfully the Poetess turns the tables on time and skin so that skin is the lay preacher as the journey is the teacher 'til the end, yes we need to feel touch, without feeling touched we are but resting on the quietude of pillows that once spoke in tongues.
    " And time forgets it's shoes in mirrors" Outstanding at portraying how we may forget to walk whilst lost to reflections. The reference to lives naked in this house is a perefect ending for it says to the reader that nothing is hidden within this building. Beautifully, beautifully, beautifully written. Kudos.


  • zochit2me gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    Oh this is simply delicious.
    Love surely glows in you eyes Nick and swells through your quill to come out as magical words spilled with grace as well as style.

    this left me breathless...

    Becky


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    "IV"

    "sleep in me, wake me

    in a glow that touches
    with the wild abandon
    of purple flowers
    among grass"

    Sighhh...You do skin such justice, my Sister. Good luck in Zayra's contest, Sweetie. Absolutely gorgeous. Vlindertjie

  • Rowan gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    Oh, Nicolette, this is so richly written; mature as fine wine and new love. Definitely first page material.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    an old journey into new ground, where things solidify and become tangible and real

    beautimous stuff


  • misselaineous
    April 6, 2008
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    beautiful poetry


  • Allyce May gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    "lay words like “us” in my mouth

    before I acquire the vocabulary
    of old age"

    Beautiful as ever! There are so many amazing entries in this contest, I have never seen anything like it! Everything you write is a masterpiece, I have no idea how you do it; I think it may have something to do with your inspiration

    The love of you two makes such amazing poetry, and heartwarming reading

    • Nicolette gold member
      April 6, 2008
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      Jaaaa.. the inspiration, definately .

      I had to edit this one a bit - it was longer than a 100 words; but i wanted to post it for my liefie. Thank you, Allyce


  • Heath Thompson
    April 6, 2008

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    Hello Nicolette,

    I love reading your work as there is always something in it that makes me sit up, something that turns me inside.

    In this case it is your 3rd Stanza - excellent

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