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Other World















I often sit and wonder,
as I stare at the starry sky,
and at the Big Blue Marble staring back
as the dark of night draws nigh.

Because I have seen so many pictures
of this Earth that I live upon,
which seems a perfect duplicate
of this one that's gone by dawn.

And I can't help but think I'm dreaming,
or that it's a mirror I'm gazing at,
or that this other world truly does exist,
and that I'm on another just like that.

And if it is indeed another world,
and my mind's not gone amiss,
if it's a parallel world of the one I'm in,
another world like this,

if there might be someone sitting there,
if he could possibly be,
staring up at his starry skies right now,
another, just like me.









































Author notes

Background and poem by ebpoetry/ebgalleries

Art used:

Earth 1 (Sky): http://www.adlerplanetarium.org/cyberspace/planets/earth/images/earth01.jpg

Snow Scene, Earth 2: f_the_week/06120306/Mystical%20Park.jpg">http://www.photographyblog.com/images/phot f_the_week/06120306/Mystical%20Park.jpg

Added Stargazer: http://kailand.deviantart.com/art/Star-Gazing-40130766

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  • enitsirhC
    July 2, 2008
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    Thanks for entering my contest!


  • z etoile
    May 28, 2008
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    Incredible!

    And I can't help but think I'm dreaming,
    or that it's a mirror I'm gazing at,
    or that this other world truly does exist,
    and that I'm on another just like that.


    My favorate stanza cause I can feel these emotions!
    This is absolutely amazing I felt your feelings throughout the poem!


  • Ithica silver member
    April 21, 2008

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    This is simply breathtaking... The poem the background the whole of it is spectacular... I am left with my jaw hinged wide open... WOW!!!


    • The Madman silver member
      April 21, 2008
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      Oh you are too kind as usual....well, maybe not...it is isnt it...lol. We all have our moments. That background took a LOT of work.

      Thank you for your visit and for your kind comments,

      Evan


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    Nice back ground and wonderful poem. Congrats on the hm


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 9, 2008

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    Wonderfully meshed images along with a poem which matches the sentiment of the background perfectly. As usual, I am impressed!


    • The Madman silver member
      April 10, 2008
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      Thanks so much for your visit and the wonderful comment you have graced this work with, always appreciated,

      Evan


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    I have wondered this many times as well. You have expressed these thoughts very well. You just may want to do a spell check. Don't forget to add the link to your notes. Thanks for entering and good luck.


    • The Madman silver member
      April 6, 2008
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      Finaly got the BG to upload! Don't know what the problem was but it took hours of trying and retrying, so it is done now' as is the poem.

      Evan

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