The more I’m awake my dreams come true.
But with out sleep I can’t invision you.
The day seems dead, without your eyes.
My faceless stare, I try to disguise.
Watching the sun fade way.
Your my life, you brightened the day.
I love your smile.
I love your heart.
You left me, now I’m falling apart.
All the pain in my life,
can be ended by just one knife.
You said you loved me.
That was a lie.
You fade away as I rot and die.
A contest entry
- Breakups by slippingofftheedge.
300 points, ended August 22, 2008, 32 entries
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i love the last line
it flowed really well with the rhyme and meter -
cheer up sweetheart..i no how dis can can feel smtym..bt u really should no dat it does get better..keep up the good write..i no dat i dnt no ya nd you dnt no me..bt im smone dat cares about..im always here..if you ever need smone to talk..just keep smilin..always
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