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Whispered

 
 
Whispered through the universe,          
spoken as softest sigh.

The creation of the woman,         

our creator’s artful eye.

 

Sculpting the universe,

a vision of his beauty.

Etching tender details,

and wise eternal foresight.

 

One artistic day of eternity,

fills her soul with gazing starlite.

Shaped with his grace,

caressed and moulded intimately.


 A womb of her own,

to raise her unborn child.

Instincts nest and breasts transform,

leaking milk for her newly born.

 

Powerfully brought  to life,

by the breath of God himself.

The essence of omnipotence,

empowers her with might.

 

Rumored through the heavens,

a time when angels were disgraced.

Unable to resist the beauty and seductions,

tender woman did embrace.

 

Sweet and soft ,

is our flesh to the touch.

The tender hand of our Creator's

devoted love.

 

Whispered through the Universe,                                                

the creation of woman.

 

 

 

                           

 

 

 

Author notes

contest prompt; poet wanted lots of creative imagery,
so that's what i added.
Inspired by the so many beautiful pictures of women
she provided, each created by one single breath of
a father creator's love.


imagery links, talented artistry of :
image shack and plighthouse,
see contest link for direct links and specific artist.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    A beautifully tender write. Gorgeous imagery woven throughout, flow is spot on. Superbly penned, good luck in your contest


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 8, 2008

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    Stunning imagery and writing here. The woman in all her glory having been created. The font of all life. Wonderful beautiful words here that are very deep and profound about the creation of women.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
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  • CountryCousin
    April 7, 2008

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    The images.

    The images are simply beautiful and the poem was equally exquisite. You did a beautiful job on this. I loved everything about this. Did you put on your authors pages.


  • tawk gold member
    April 7, 2008

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    Wow this is amazing! Wow what a beaufiful story of the creation of women. They background and pictures are breathtaking. Such vivid and beautiful imagery. I so enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    beautiful words of how God created us! my aren't we blessed to be women??

    you've outdone yourself with the pics and background girl!!

    Love
    Mary


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    Awesome thoughts! Very beautiful sentiments as well. A shame though that some can't bear children like they may want, but we still have the capacity to love and nurture. Well done. Thanks for entering and good luck!

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