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wild city haiku

armed with pistols

liquor store rocks

no money left

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prompt: wild in the city haiku

non-traditional haiku

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    April 19, 2008
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    Wow this is an urban haiku for sure thank you for your entry


  • aeolia
    April 6, 2008

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    Really well-written, especially for a haiku! They're hardly ever done well, but that's certainly not the case here.

    Nice picture, too.

    -Cristina