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Want

Want
Burns my throat
Consumes
Me in a void
Of scorching flames
Eating
My thoughts
Away aimlessly
I'm choking
On obsession
Thinking
Constantly
About one thing
Try to concentrate
Focus!
Focus!
Suffocating
On my own breath
So pitiful
Is my determination
If I can't shrug this off
How will I ever
Try
To become
The person
I long
To be?
Free from OCD
and
Me

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  • XneverXgoodXenoughX
    January 25
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    very good. it describes the daily struggles so well, and in amazing detail.