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Cancerous touch

 

 

The wind blows softly with her cancerous touch

Her tenderness caressed and needed so much

She smells of delights untouched from before

A smile that lingers leaving you wanting much more

 

A lick of the finger

A taste from right now

Delicious delights

Only she will allow

 

Into the darkness she forces you there

Sitting so nicely you kiss and pull hair

She fondles and plays and teases you well

Each beat of her heart brings life to your swell

 

Perched in that moment of ecstasy and calm

You reach for the juices dripping full in your palm

You taste with great pleasure your fingers of pride

Remembering that moment the heaven bird cried  

  

 

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  • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
    April 10, 2008

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    great piece you've penned here!
    good luck in my contest!

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  • Amera gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    Wonderful imagery with a great meter and flow. This piece paints a vivid picture as it tells the story.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    Nicely penned.