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SC...Our Love

Missing image

Your

shadow walks beside me

so close no one can see

My

love for you is silent

quietly you hold me

Our love

is so secure

Both

our hearts are free

 

 

A contest entry

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 19, 2008

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    I need to know in casse this poem is the one, that it is okay to give to my lover. if you object please tell me ASAP

  • Papagallo
    April 14, 2008
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    Beautiful and warm. Good luck in the contest.


  • Beanbiscuit
    April 12, 2008
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    Gorgeous and moving. Few words yet much soul.


  • Blooming Poet
    April 11, 2008
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    Beautiful poem. so short but so amazing little poem. That tells an amazing story.

  • Papagallo
    April 8, 2008
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    Beautiful love poem. It warms my very soul


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    April 7, 2008
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    The opening stanza---perfection!


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    lovely a joy to read . so simple xx good luck honey

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