wild violets
hug roadsides
many parked cars
A contest entry
- THE WILD HAIKU by Swan song.
1259 points, ended April 19, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Love the abstract imagery effect of these three, three sylable line. A wild haiku indeed, congrats on the bronze, This is a beautiful poem.
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I love the vivid picture I get to see through your words. A lovely haiku. Congratulations on your trophy.
Kelli -
Now this is a breif haiku and very vivid showing the interaction of effect between nature and man.
Well done
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A study in juxtapositions: wild/tame, natural/man-made, organic/mechanical. Much accomplished in few words. The essence of haiku
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Hi, great haiku, aml Di
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Lovely images in striking contrast. You make this look easy.
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Hi Mum. A good write. Vivid descriptives. You paint a picture with you words that the reader can clearly see. Good word choice and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.
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Oh, nice contrast. I like the thought of these little plants rubbing up right against humanity's asphalt, metal and plastic.
Marlene
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