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Eternal Golden Braid - Escher, Gödel, Bach

 

Escher, Gödel, Bach, together
make mind's music tempo weather
form to storm blocks, light as feather
turn constraints most, far less clever,
see as strictures which tight tether,
not as pictures hell-for-leather
spirit lead to question whether
consistency's illusion ever.

Patterns into patterns weaving
both deceiving, undeceiving,
here perception sees stairs leaving
there inspection stares, seize cleaving.

Somehow someone reconciling
forwards, back, and time a-whiling,
motion into more compiling,
starts ball rolling inwards smiling
outwards treadmills single-filing
round in circles never riling,
ever onwards as the aisle in
fact or fiction sets key styling.

As impressions artist wording
so the poet, insight girding
paints life's canvas sixth sense herding

into bridge for future wording. 

Mind unwinding never minding
dizzy blinding reels from binding
backwards grinding, from behinding,
springs forth for a fourth time binding
far horizons, nearness, finding
that perceptions interwinding
vision skew to keep reminding
constantly of traces grinding.

Keeping tabs on locomotion
through a tableau that commotion
seems, in turmoil, senseless ocean,
stems from structure's subtle potion.

Thus confusion into fusion
tracks intact design solution
ends, means melds without intrusion
'spite apparent convolution,
inks links' thinklings in profusion
to coherency's conclusion
in a trice as revolution
follows former revolution.

As on canvas, outing, inning,
every level underpinning
exits, entrances rolls spinning
out with no precise beginning.

Pattern's blueprint formulation
seen from every angle, station,
heightened by anticipation,
tunes vocation through elation.


Thus, thereby, emancipation
spins from, through, strict forms - sensation
self-sustaining, graduation
from starting point to revelation.

Theme dream on examination

mocks fixed formulae - vocation

centred on an evocation

of infinite re-rotation.

Constant, also, the vibration

of energy whose swift gyration

channels vim swim through migration

of and from no fixed location,

to, from, some conscious bifurcation -

de facto self-perpetuation -

factoring each fresh mutation

in reworked association.

Page sets stage thats soon a-filling
and attention draws which, willing,
keys to context, content, spilling
from poetic pen fulfilling.

Images retinal reeling
showing much, as much concealing,
flowing touch in touch revealing,
knowing such from time time's stealing,
offer insights into feeling
through dimensions thus unsealing
variations on themes peeling
from perceptions wheeling-dealing

round and round with no chance-dancing
as each level all enhancing
contributes to each entrancing
wave with exit, entrance, glancing.

Rendering impressions sending
bending into further bending
humour with perspective lending,
leading where uncondescending ?

Fencing words then fences mending
up, down, sideways, first ascending,
then descending ending, ending
in horizons more appending.

Why continue rhyming chiming,
rapid rhythmic tempo climbing,
further options subtle priming
til atrophy a trophy timing ... ?  

 

 

Author notes

PIC 1 M C Escher : Relativity


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pic Golden Braid
http://flickr.com/photos/anua22a/2299631152/sizes/o/

Spin pic
http://www.flickr.com/photos/simbolism/2388360107/

Background M S Escher Stairs


See Douglas Hofstadter : An Eternal Golden Braid

Escher Gödel Bach

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  • mamanita
    June 26
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    At first, I was really enjoying the poem, Very much!!

    'ever onwards as the aisle in;
    paints life's canvas sixth sense herding;
    backwards grinding, from behinding,'

    ↑↑I was going to say that these three lines should be worked on or removed, but I realized that your poem was a lot longer.
    All I could focus on was the rhyme.
    Any point being made was lost in rhyme.

    As I said I was enjoying your poem, then I realised I needed a bathroom break.

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  • myrataal silver member
    June 3
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    In the maze of ladders reaching ...

    swift ascending be descending
    into inner chambers leading
    unto outer landings creeping
    be the windows doors aflooring
    be the storeys flats galoring
    wait the lovers for enslavement
    freed the secrets from entrapment

    ...

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    • into inner chambers leading

      M any moon moods Hiawatha
      Y ears perfecting for mind's coffer
      R eeling spent for rhyming message
      A ntic also merry presage
      T hat might herald open entry
      A bsent secrets, absent sentry,
      A s through panes all pain dissolving
      L ight solutions solving, solving ...

      • myrataal silver member
        June 3

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        Joy's salvage in words' teasing

        O ffers found in poet's chevage
        N umbers count in steps of staircase
        A mbush turned to dance in slow pace
        T ravel of a soul in motion
        H esitant on power potion
        A rticulate a phrase in magic
        N eutralize a spell in tragic


  • Xqzt
    May 5
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    In spinning rooms entangled... how confusing... how impressive!
  • who iam
    April 7

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    Long but flowing

    Initially i was dizzy but as the story evolved I settled in,Good write,as it seems to be about life!

  • PerVirtuous gold member
    April 7

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    I see lots of references to Escher, but not many to Bach or Godel. The book was about the mathematics of recursive self-referencing patterns. I really don't see much mention of that. Am I missing the metaphors?
    It is a very good poem for the picture.

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    • Responsum

      The self referencing dimensions of the poem, set within a context of unusual if not unique rhyme and rhythm ARE the Eternal Golden Braid - and thus you will find implicit music of Bach while at the same time the spiral could continue ad infinitum.

  • Nymph-Angel
    April 7

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    Glorious Rhythem!

    Very well structured. It seems like it could go on forever spiraling through time completely ageless. But your backround does make it rather confusing to read other's comments!

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  • TheMinstrel gold member
    April 7
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    WOW

    Art is its verbose way, shows what the artist of light and shadow felt in the painting. I love it!

  • The structure.

    The structure was deeply interesting and I can see how someone would get lost in it. This is the best collection of words that I have seen. However I got tired, too long a day at work. But you sure can make an interesting poem.

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  • hscopazzi
    April 7
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    Maybe...

    Its because I have ADD but I cannot read this with this background!

    Harmony
  • This is an amazing write and the rhyme flow is wonderful and the stanza are perfect as they lead from one to the next, as I read this I could even see Escher doing many of his master peices of art work, I recently became familur with him from another contest on here and admire his work and you for sure put it all in this write it is an extrodianry write with out a doubt!

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  • my first impression is, to wish I was reading it on paper to allow me time to deconstruct and reconstruct it several times for starters! The rhyme scheme is brilliantly controlled and the rythmn builds from stanza to stanza, as unrelenting as the perpetual motion of never ending escalators, moving up and down, in and out and sometimes through. There! how did I do?
    'humour with perspective lending
    leading where uncondescending?'
    I will have to put you on my favorites list just to be able to revisit and reread!

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  • Lady Altheia silver member
    April 7

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    Wow this is a really long piece. I will have to come back and finish reading it. From what I read, I liked.

  • Lily otv
    April 7

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    Amazing ...

    As on canvas, outing, inning,
    every level underpinning
    exits, entrances rolls spinning
    out with no precise beginning.

    This poem reminds me of life, always striving to move onwards and upwards but the path is a maze which never quite reaches the intended target. The rhythm and rhyme in this piece do however reach their target with fine precision and the content provides a lot of food for thought.

    . Rewarded 8

  • fantastic

    great beat, rhyming and structure

    and a great take on the prompt

    i really loved this piece and the background just adds to its greatness

    well done, good luck and thanks for entering

    . Rewarded 4

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