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[ an old mailbox ]

an old mailbox
along the lane
robin’s new nest

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A contest entry

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  • Kelli Marie
    April 19, 2008

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    Bravo!! Golden haiku if ever I read one. You did a beautiful job with this. Congratulations on your win.
    Kelli


  • Odd Thomas
    April 18, 2008
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    amazing


  • micol
    April 18, 2008

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    This has a nice sense of tone, of warmth...the world of nature fitting into our cast-off structures, enduring and surviving.


  • Swan song gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    This is a brush stroke that I have seen and this goes beyond the mail box I can see the foundation of what was once a home The changes of time and on and on
    This is exceptional


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    April 6, 2008

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    WOW! A beautiful haiku we have here! Lovely aha moment in L3. Beautiful alliteration in L3. I like how you gradually zoomed in on the image in this haiku. I felt I was walking with you.

    Goodluck!

    Charishma


  • ukelova
    April 6, 2008

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    awesome!

    Hello there!

    This is an awesome haiku. The disused mailbox (maybe because of emails andinternet billpaying) becomes a ready-made nest.

    I love it.

    Good luck in the contest; I think you'll do well with this little beauty!

    Have a gr8 day,
    BJ.

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