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Online Love

Never really saw your face
Never really believed your place
Never really understood who you are
Never really thought it would go this far

6 months now.
We're still in "love"
Except of the fact that I could be 1000 miles away
and I don't know truly how you feel

The fact that these jokes could be making you LMAO
and these puns that make you ROFL
and my misunderstood intentions that make you think WTF
and my breaches of trust that make you say OMG

You could be saying LOL, but not really be doing anything
You could be saying "O.o" to question me, when you really understand
and you could be AFK just to get away from me

And from here, I don't think I trust you right now
And I dont know how you feel
But I dont think I can fall in love with someone
who just isn't real

~<3

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  • AloneForever-
    May 26, 2008
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    nice work..


  • nessundorma
    April 10, 2008
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    great work i love it!


  • SilverMoonFeathers
    April 6, 2008

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    Wow

    This is really good. This is exactly what i think about online daters man.....its true to the core and like seriously really good. GREAT job.


  • MagicaI
    April 6, 2008
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    Great job! LOL not.. why am I commenting my own poem -.-'