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A simple whisper

The stairway to heaven; such a terrible climb
The stairway to heaven; at the heart of all songs
The stairway to heaven; some do not survive
The stairway to heaven; a legend of old

Hear the sweet sound of etheral voices
Such a brave cloud, such an innocent mist
Hear the sweet sound of ethereal voices

Author notes

I added my second most recent poem as well. I hope that is OK! Oh, and I cut down the title because otherwise it was pretty long and random and I didn't like it!

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  • Melodies
    April 7, 2008

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    What fun! You have stolen from yourself and gained a beautiful new poem. We might all do that and see what happens. Now and then a really fine poem emerges, such as YOURS!