It is as if you need to tell me something,
but can't seem to grow up enough to say it,
so let me say it for you,
"I hate you.
You lied to me, then lied to my face.
You spent the time to give me friendship, to burn it from me.
You took my friends and then my boyfriend.
I gave you my life, and you laughed at it.
I gave you my soul and you took it for your gain,
then threw it back at me!
You gave me nothing while I gave everything to you!
You turned away from me when I needed you!"
And now that I have said what you need to,
It's my turn!
I don't give a shit.
Author notes
>.< so it's a different take on it, but the betrayal is there. sorry for the swear if it offends you.
A contest entry
- BackStabber! by GypsyEyes.
575 points, ended April 18, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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my bestfriend is going through this! i mean the girl was her friend and writing love notes to my bestfriends boyfriend! wtf!?!? great poem! that person didnt deserve your friendship. thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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...^^;; well thanks, but i think you may want to read through it one more time. The speaker is saying what her friend needs to and the speaker is the one who took the boyfriend and all. The speaker is very indifferent to it and the friend of the speaker is spazing over it.
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ooooooooh lmao! my bad! either way i liked the poem!
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