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Hidden

With shaking hands
And eager needs
I hide my heart
Where even I can’t find it.
I hesitate
I take a breath
I open my eyes
To the nothing
I’ve become.
The irises of black
Paint pictures
In my mind
Colorless and dull
With no meaning to be
Found
Wherever I choose to
Hide
I swear to you, I’m
Lost.

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This kinda came from nowhere. I ended up liking it though

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  • mizerdrea
    April 6, 2008
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    I love the rhyme...!!
    Nice poems...


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    April 6, 2008

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    Very deep and sad!
    I hope that you feel better soon.
    Take care and thanks for sharing
    this one here!




    Jeremy0826