For once I am done
Done with all the lies
Done with the pain
Done with all this torture
The stuff I take from you.
The search for the good in you
has expired a while ago,
and seemingly,
I had just received
the memo.
Author notes
yeah... sometimes you realize that the search is over a bit too late.
Not exactly sure how it came out, so please comment honestly Thanks
A contest entry
- Passing Through A Search- 1000 Point Contest! by Acidanthra.
1000 points, ended April 7, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Uh. I think you received the memo, but you were just too lazy to do anything about it. It's right next to the one that tells you to get the matches from your car ^__^
I liked it though. It's hard to get a point across in so little amount of lines, and you were able to pull it off very well in this one. No wonder it received an HM. Good job! Talk to you later!!
says "I pity the fool who doesn't read the post its !"
Carli~
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Well done dear, and a little emotional house cleaning never hurt anyone.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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very good poem, but in this line "Done with all this toucher" did you mean torture instead? just trying to be helpful is all, but still a great poem!
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thanks
I fixed it
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