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Big Pool Regatta

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The day had come
Finally here
Big Pool's finest
Dressed in school colors
Of putrid green
Man what a scene!
Parading in slow stride
For to some babes eye
To catch
Descended upon their skiff
At the ready their task
When with a crack
Their opponent gone
But at the line
Still set Big Pool
When heard from the shores

YOU FORGOT THE OARS!

 

Author notes

As close as I could get.....RCLane

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  • MagicLady silver member
    April 8, 2008

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    This was very clever and I really enjoyed it. The last line was a kicker.....love the fonts you used. Thanks so much for the entry in the contest.

    Cheryl


  • Topaz135 gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    certainly a unique and humorous take on the photograph. amusing indded. Good luck with it