I thought before
when eyes met the sun
and time passed slowly
dragging along my heart
in it’s emptiness
that maybe
-this moment
could
remain-
when you held me in your arms
refusing to let me
be taken to the dark side
away from your love
where time flew
like vultures
-ripping life
from this
moment-
But you saved me
wrapping me in your love
and refusing to let
the clock continue
running it’s verge
and you held me on a string
there I was
-hanging
by a
moment-
Author notes
option 6
inspired by the song
Hanging by a Moment by Lifehouse
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Oh wow, hun. I really like this!! it goes with the song so well. really... and its well-written. loving it!
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