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Golden-Eyed Dreams

charcoal clouds of cumulus
in mystifying skies of indigo,
like life of an outcast sequestered;
shining gleams of remote light
sporadically in illumination;

handfuls of flora for the picking,
gently kissed messages of innocence
when shall love be found?
emerald fields of golden-eyed dreams
waving wistfully in the winds

shadowed in obscured darkness;
discerning the storms of thought
in idle restraint of whispered hope
ethereal aureate hued wishes winking
light in heavenly wondered promise



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PROMPT CHOICE:

On the sunny side of life by `gilad
http://www.deviantart.com/print/497232/

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  • PerfectImperfection
    April 11, 2008

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    A great take on the prompt chosen, shining such depth of detain into the image with words. Nicely done! Thank you so much for your entry!


  • thepoetssoul
    April 6, 2008

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    Tis an exellent write for the prompt.
    Splendid imagery and wording
    Hope you do well in the contest.

    Tony