A night… a freedom
so welcome [desired]
for sixteen years
you waited
-for a
single
piece of
plastic-
For once you’re on your own
adrenaline rushes like a river
through your veins
and you’re gone
-the dust
your final
goodbye-
Back arrival, burnt rubber cooled,
until you realize
the end is not in sight
but a simple beginning
while metal crashes with metal
-and the car
got in a fight
with the door-
and won
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Author notes
true story lol
A contest entry
- THE SATURDAY NIGHT PARTY [challenge] [tonight] by Ryno.
300 points, ended April 7, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Well at least you won. I know from experience there's nothing worse than losing a fight with a door. lol
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LOL
I remember you telling me about this Meg. xD
That was truly halarious and even funnier to read in poetic style
Thanks for the entry... AND MAJORLY THE LAUGH
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