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Daffodils & Roses

My heart explodes with daffodils & roses
My mind is gone and I cannot feel a thing.
I see in bright colors, my head imposes
As I get tangled in dreames like string.

You can't imagine what happiness you've brought
With few simple words and an embrace
So I sit here with just one thaught
That your image I shall never replace

I smile today, I'll smile everyday
Because my heart feels like a fresh bouquet
I smile for you, when my happiness discloses
As my heart explodes with daffodils & roses.

Romantic much?

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  • Lukey
    February 17

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    A classic, straightforward poem, with good rhyming. I liked the connectedness created by using the same entrance and exit lines. Nicely written.