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My Death

Seeing their faces
Smiling and laugh
I want to join in

Seeing their faces
Crying and weeping
I want to comfort them

Seeing their faces
Red and angry
I want to stay away

Seeing their faces
I want to be them
But tonight I'm going to heaven

I hope God still wants me
I took the only thing I had
... my life

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  • Venugopal gold member
    April 5, 2008
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    A nice poem with depth