Outline burned against the sky
Majesty in full power
Spite in graceful curves
Branch crackling underfoot
Light evaporating off lithe beauty
Statue or not
Eagle
Eagle
Author notes
http://www.painteasy.com/floral57new%20web%20page.jpg
here's the pic that inspired me!
1. I have been on AP since sometime before halloween I think
2. Dancing the Rumba
3. 11
4. I am on AP about once every three days
I hope you like my poem!!!
A contest entry
- Wanted: Come Inside To See by JeannieD Hunter.
2000 points, ended April 16, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Audition Round by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 14, 2008, 34 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Guaranteed Comments! II by Nam.
1750 points, ended June 8, 2008, 94 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Critique! I love critical comments!
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A nice short little poem. Not much else to say but that.
-Nam
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Ignore that last comment.
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You are so young but yet your poetry is quite amazing. At 11 I could never write this good. Congrats you made it past the audition.
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50/50 for following rules
25/25 for overall poetic ability
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Hmmm... I like the simplistic nature of this poem. Very simple, yet really descriptive.
This is very well done...
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This is a strong impression of the eagle.
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Wonderful
A very nice poem. So well written. Best of luck in the contest.
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This is a strong a powerful piece that describes the picture perfectly. Eagles are amazing and this is impressive work. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you very much for this great comment. Thank you for the luck, too!
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11 years old!! Wow!! This is very impressive. This would make an awesome caption to be framed along with the painting. This is a write to be very proud of! Thanks for entering and good luck! (Since this is an anonymous contest I can't IM you, graceful is misspelled)
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Thank you very much for the nice comment! I fixed the spelling.
V
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your write a short but a very beautiful poem many applauses to you, very good.
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Thank you very much for the wonderful comment,
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