The moment that she screams,
and i walk away in tears.
[It's at that point we know]
something went wrong
How can someone with such a pure heart;;
say something like that.
and have no regrets..
First it's secrets,
Then it's rumours,
Next is lies,
And then it's over.
How long could i last?
Putting up with this sh*t
- - - Day After Day.
Smiles as i tell her my deepest [darkest] thoughts.
Promises are broken
In A Second.
Situations i never thought i'd be in
come to me.
+ People talking
+ Reputations dead
+ Friends lost
+ &&. She walks away; selfishly.
Ruining my life,
The friend i thought that cared,
Just turns away when i look at her,
And otherwise, just gives me a deathly stare.
BackStabber, I Hope You Scream In Your Sleep
at the thought of what you did to me..
A contest entry
- BackStabber! by GypsyEyes.
575 points, ended April 18, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a beauriful poem you have lots of talent and i really think this sort of talent needs to be published
well done -
very beautiful poem! i liked how you formatted it! i hate when you tell some one to promise and they break about 10 seconds later! stupid people! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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any truth to this poem?
seems inspired.
hope not.
though it is a really emotional and nicely structured work
weldone mads
xx -
WOW
I love this poem. It shows how you feel well how every body feels when their friend,BEST FRIEND, talks shit.
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