be that which is
and has become apart of you
let nothing be not that part
that part you don't like about yourself
you are the one you want to be
alone you are nothing
that's why you'll always need them
is this true?
maybe
we can only hope not
because by yourself you are one
you are complete
a true work of god
I am alive
you can be too
let yourself
thats all you'll ever have to do
let me not be your reason
make not this your crime
I have nothing to offer
for I have not the time
I can only be me
the same from you
thats all I expect
never think more
because I'll always think less
Author notes
I am 18 > 02/19/1990 =] thanks!
A contest entry
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Comments
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This has a very circular feel to it. I have to confess that I am unsure as to what movie you are referring. At any rate this is rather cryptic and flows well. Good l uck in the contest.
~ Joyce
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let me not be your reason
make not this your crime
^^favorite lines.
=D
great, great meaning. =D
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you said my honest opinion so here it goes: I love it!!
its amamzing!! "you are complete
a true work of god" so beautiful1!!
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Very good poem. Well written, and it all flows together very well. I think my favorite part is the last two lines. Seems like a lot of people just aren't willing to be themselves anymore.
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