Lovely Hawaiian Lolita,
playing gentle sounds
Her eyes glisten in pure happiness
At the life that is around
Feet softly dance as ukelale song
Enters the air and causes hearts to stir all around
Lovely Hawaiian Beauty,
lend me your hand
Let me spin you around
And dance in the sand.
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Author notes
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8792/karlbangorientalart04do3.jpg
[for inspiration]
A contest entry
- Wanted: Come Inside To See by JeannieD Hunter.
2000 points, ended April 16, 2008, 21 entries
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This is a very sweet and soft piece that works well with the picture you selected. Very well done. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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very much so,,, nice take on the photo... good luck in the contest. keep on writing
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