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Stepping stones

English & Concepts
4 steps
3 steps
2 steps

Misguided meanings
&
Lost stairs

{upon}
{which}
{to}
{step}

Stumble on thoughts,
fall through the space;
grasp a corners edge
ripping off lace-

Gaze to distant ideas-
as you fall through the cracks.
To the puddles of dreams
of which everyone lacks.

To the landing
of evolutions kind...
{step}
{the}
{stepping}
{-stones-}
{to the mind}





Cackle and laugh, Cackle and laugh, what did you feel on your behalf?

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    April 11, 2008

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    guided, misguided--

    "Gaze to distant ideas-"

    Liking the landing
    which evolves,
    stepping, stepping
    to the mind.
    Adventurous,
    as your mind
    always is...

    Aesthete