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Board It Up.

We're building walls
To tear them down
And it's all over
You'll be sorry when I'm gone

6 more months
Of toiling pain
I miss my easy days
No more pain, just let me sleep away the day

The world is just watching me
Falling in love with me
And you don't seem to care
If I crawl or fall, you won't be there

There's no reason to really care
Let me die alone or help me live my hollow life
There's nothing left for me to strive towards
Nothing left for me fall back on

The world is shunning me
Laughing and kicking me
And as I fall to the ground
You turn your head to hide your disgust

It's not my fault
Please tell me it's not my fault
Let there be a reason for my demise
To your sweet surprise

And when you come to from the high
Your face will contort
And you'll watch me die
Hide your face & live my life

Well....suppose you can give me something to work with?

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    Nice job on this Jess really well written and strong kinda depressing though, like you said...



    -Steve-