Girl:
Darling, my darling
My sugar sweet lovely, you taste divine.
Your kisses are sweeter than creme de leche
Eyes are marbled as delicious spun glass
Peirce in to my seductive gaze
Those butter smooth touches drive my caramel coated skin ablaze
Boy:
Those luscious brown bonbons that hang from your frame
Drive my senses to numb in the brain
Ruby red cherries that mortals call lips
Only want me to hold you and give you a kiss
As deep as an ocean, drenched in sun
My angel, my coffee colored dove
Lovers of lovers of heart and sweets
Have an empty core and stomach to feed
These chefs of amore and creations decedent
Their carnal passions of both fields, magnificent
His creamy pale body melds oh so well
With her cacao brown flesh
Under the sheets
Delicate strawberries are engulfed to eat
As tongues dance past their fruit
Sizzling like banana foster
Food and Love, mix, collide, and take root.
A contest entry
- Vanilla and Chocolate - a Sensual Confection by dance11.
1000 points, ended April 20, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Psssst! I see that you corrected one spelling issue, but there are a couple more there. I really like your piece and want to keep you in the finalists, if you will fix the typos. Sorry if I'm a pain in the arse, it's just a pet peeve of mine. Great job on the elements of the poem, however. Good luck!
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Yummy! You really drew me in to the sensual feeling of this piece. Then I hit some spelling issues. If you want a chance at placing in the contest, I recommend you recheck the spelling before the contest closes. The imagery was right on spot! Very nice write!
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